Here's my first horror story, tell me what you think?

by Jen | Posted in Books & Authors

After a Halloween party daunting, Jessie walks home alone in the dark with no boyfriend at her side. She is traveling alone on the long winding road, cold and freezing, it is covered with his black cape, with the cap on his head, too Ashmed to be seen.

Well you have some angelic action here, so it's not a bad start. You really do need to work on your spelling and punctuation though. Aside from that, you're also powerful instead of showing.







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